Score: 0

"Boring"

submission: cherryAnn

date: May 22, 2009

Nothing special about it, just a song with tweened alpha changes. I'm sure you made this for the girl you like, but the vast majority of Newgrounds will find this boring.

Score: 10

"Perfect"

submission: Bunny Charm

date: May 17, 2009

Its addicting, fun, and somewhat challenging,
The look of this game is so nice. I love being surrounded by notebooks, pencils, and cups. You did a great job on making a mini world.
The game play is great. A nice feature is the ability to upgrade. Also all the difficultly modes available give it a good playback value.
Good job on making one of the funnest flash games I've ever played.

Score: 2

"Nothing new or great"

submission: The 30lvl Quiz

date: May 16, 2009

Well its just another quiz game that could have been better. It doesn't look like you spent anytime with it at all. The flash has no backgrounds, which really brings down the score. All this is really is buttons and music, with nothing else to it.
About the music, maybe you could have added a music player at the bottom for people to change the song or even mute it altogether.

Score: 2

"No improvement"

submission: X+

date: May 16, 2009

Well, I see you made a new calculator, but this one is still no better. Its bland and isn't really appealing to the eyes. Maybe you should make it look like a real calculator. Other then that, most computers if not all have them. If they don't then the person isn't looking hard enough.
Better luck next time

Score: 3

"Ok attempt"

submission: .:NG Calculator:.

date: May 16, 2009

While I understand you spent some time with this, its kinda pointless. Most computers now have calculators but if they don't, then this flash is perfect for them.
If you could change anything, maybe add a drop down menu to choose what you want to do with the numbers, instead of having them off by the side.
Maybe a blurry image of the Newgrounds Homepage as the background.
Also a music play could have helped.
Other then that, nothing is really here that will keep me using this flash fro more than a few seconds.
On a final note, when I clicked the link at the bottom, it didn't take me anywhere, but it could just be my PC. You might want other people to check that out.
Other than all that, keep trying and I'm sure you'll produce something great.

Score: 10

"Good"

submission: Clock Crew e-drama

date: July 29, 2008

I would call this the clock submission of the week.
The animation is fluent and the story is nothing short of amazing in my book.
I wish there had been more action but I can settle for this piece of fine work.

Score: 7

"Improving"

submission: Super_Mario Demo Final

date: July 28, 2008

I played the other versions of this and I can say that they are improving.
This game is shaping up to be a good Mario game and I await more.
Only thing I didn't like was the Goombas who were annoying when trying to avoid them.

Score: 0

"What was that"

submission: Yo B!

date: July 28, 2008

It looks like you spent no time on the animation, so thats something you should improve on. The voices...well I couldn't understand them. I'm not sure if it was an audio clip taken from a movie or it was you talking, either way thats something to work on. Next time you submit, take more time on your animation.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: Comic-Con 2008 Poster

date: July 27, 2008

That's a great poster.
It would look really nice hung up in my room.
Johnny has to be one of the greatest artist on NG
Good job with the poster

Score: 9

"Amazing game"

submission: Amorphous+

date: July 27, 2008

I like the award system. It gave a reason to play and try to kill as many glooples as you can. The music went well with everything as did the graphics. This is a game someone could play for a few hours and get a lot out of it.
I have no complaints about this game, its a great game worth trying.