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Good

I would call this the clock submission of the week.
The animation is fluent and the story is nothing short of amazing in my book.
I wish there had been more action but I can settle for this piece of fine work.

What was that

It looks like you spent no time on the animation, so thats something you should improve on. The voices...well I couldn't understand them. I'm not sure if it was an audio clip taken from a movie or it was you talking, either way thats something to work on. Next time you submit, take more time on your animation.

Good, good

I liked this sprite submission a lot.
The animation was good
The voice acting came from one of my favorite, so that was a plus
The joke didn't make me laugh, but its one of those funny things.
The ending was cheesy but I think that's what you were going for.
Overall its a great flash and better than most of the flash making its way through the portal.

Fun game

Fun game but it has little replay value. Adding in-game achievements/goals or something worth working for besides money and upgrades would have helped out.
One thing I didn't like was the in-game advertisement that would keep popping up. I understand that you want to make money for your work, but once you start putting ads in the middle of the game it turns people off and it affects your score.
Overall a simple and fun game.

Needs Improvement

Great concept but it was poorly executed. There is no sound, no real explanation of what I'm doing except for the two buttons and the graphics were bad. I think if you were to keep working with this something awesome could be made, but for now this only gets 1 star.

Perfect

Its addicting, fun, and somewhat challenging,
The look of this game is so nice. I love being surrounded by notebooks, pencils, and cups. You did a great job on making a mini world.
The game play is great. A nice feature is the ability to upgrade. Also all the difficultly modes available give it a good playback value.
Good job on making one of the funnest flash games I've ever played.

Calming

I thought this was a pretty good piano song.
I'm a big fan of pianos so I really enjoyed this calming tune.
Anyone who wants to cool down and relax listen to this.

Really good

I loved it, best used in a flash where the protagonist is starting to realize what he must do, something epic.

Pretty good

Loved the sound, it brought back some great memories.